This poetry caused a great deal of debate when I published it long time ago, I saw this was a good chance to know how other people think about me and my religion.
I can't call it a perfect poetry, in fact it is my 1st trial to write poetry in English, and I didn't mean it to be, but those who read it considered it to be "poetry". Anyway, let's have a look:
Oh I love my religion
Being its follower is a blessing
It saves me even from myself
My religion saved me even before I was born
By ordering my father to choose the best woman
The kindest and most religious
It forbade my father from killing me by abortion
No matter what the reason is
It ordered my father to choose me a good name
And give me the best education he can
Then find me a good, kind and generous husband
And gave me freedom to choose the one I want to marry
I am also free to work or not to work
But on condition that I do my duty towards my home and children 1st
My religion ordered my husband to treat me the best way he can, even if he hated me
As he should be fair with me and give me honor and respect
My religion forbade me from making affairs out of marriage
So it saved me from being a single mother
Or I can't then face life alone
My religion forbade me from killing myself, coz my soul is not mine,
But it belongs to my creator
My religion forbade me from ruining my health
No alcohol, no drug addiction, no smoking
So that I always have good health of body and mind
My rights are always reserved
So no body has the right to take them from me
If he did so, he would be questioned in Day of Judgment.
And because every one in my country fears that day,
They stick to the good deeds
This is why I feel safe living among those people,
As long as they stick to their religion
This is a great blessing.
I can't call it a perfect poetry, in fact it is my 1st trial to write poetry in English, and I didn't mean it to be, but those who read it considered it to be "poetry". Anyway, let's have a look:
Oh I love my religion
Being its follower is a blessing
It saves me even from myself
My religion saved me even before I was born
By ordering my father to choose the best woman
The kindest and most religious
It forbade my father from killing me by abortion
No matter what the reason is
It ordered my father to choose me a good name
And give me the best education he can
Then find me a good, kind and generous husband
And gave me freedom to choose the one I want to marry
I am also free to work or not to work
But on condition that I do my duty towards my home and children 1st
My religion ordered my husband to treat me the best way he can, even if he hated me
As he should be fair with me and give me honor and respect
My religion forbade me from making affairs out of marriage
So it saved me from being a single mother
Or I can't then face life alone
My religion forbade me from killing myself, coz my soul is not mine,
But it belongs to my creator
My religion forbade me from ruining my health
No alcohol, no drug addiction, no smoking
So that I always have good health of body and mind
My rights are always reserved
So no body has the right to take them from me
If he did so, he would be questioned in Day of Judgment.
And because every one in my country fears that day,
They stick to the good deeds
This is why I feel safe living among those people,
As long as they stick to their religion
This is a great blessing.
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